All Comments on 'Serving the Married Couple'

Looking froward to part 2

part 2!

What a wonderful story.

I would love to be that guy!

I wish fairy godmothers really existed, I know what my wish would be.

Please, please, please let's have some more!

whapmanuk@hotmail.com

Nicely erotic, I've already teased my husband with it after tieing him up......more please!

Dear Strywrter7

What a fantastic story.

I wished that you were living closer, so that you could take over my wife the same way as in your very arousing story.

Looking forward to the sequel in which the couple humiliate the husband more and use the wife as their slave.

Maybe you want to take contact with us in order to change my marriage also as in your story ?

You could enslave my lovely young wife per e-mail and make her humiliate me - het older husband - likewise ?

Kind personal regards.

Tiny prince from the Netherlands.

I really love your stories. You make my body react in ways other authors don't. Please give us more!

Defnately need part 2! Don't leave us hanging.... this could make a fine series...

You need to write chapter 2 of this story!!! It was building up and then just left me hanging. Love the idea and can't wait to read more!!!

Great story but it left me hanging. I could almost taste masters cock. Please continue!

I'm leaving another comment b/c u still havn't written another chapter :-(

I would love to learn about pet and slut as they obediently serve the married couple!!

jclarke2005@hotmail.com

Very hot story -I would love to hear more!!

Thanks for the ride, what's next?

Please write another chapter or two. This was a great story!

more please, I need to feel his shame the first time tia guides her masters huge cock into my mouth and the tast of his cum filling my virgin face cunnie then when e streatches my ass cunt to the tearing point as I scream in pain as the ladies hold me up for masters pleasure. I need to feel his seed impregnating me.

Great start. Hope there is more.

I so want to read more of this and see where the adventure goes

This story is off to a fantastic start. Please continue it.

Guys will do a lot for their gal, but there doesn't seem to be an explanation w hy Don will submit himself to two strangers because girl - friend Tina wants to offer herself and Don to be abased as a package. What does Don lack that makes him amenable to this arrangement?

I loved the forced part. The overall dominance was enthralling. I would love to see another chapter with donna being turned into a locked, corseted sissy slave serving all 3.

If you count this as a story based in any form of reality. Such crap. I like this girl, let me go to a house to be a slave and for her to be ridden by other men, that is a great choice for me. Hair pulling stupidity. He would of gotten up said fuck this and walked out and wished her good luck being a slave. If you want me to think differently do it through the story and expand the plot and make it gel. God awful. No where at the beginning was it shown why he would have any interest in this. Being polite and a gentlemen does not fucking mean you want your girlfriend fucked in front of you and to be a servant for someone and give up your life. Just stupid. People have manners, two things do not go hand in hand, but this writer is so god awful. Also she lied about motives, clearly showed she is keeping secrets and wants other things and wants to go off to this couple. That is a clear warning sign to get the hell out, this story does not hold under the weight of what it is trying to peddle as to what is happening.

This story has failed to truly explain how any of this came about in reality. Very poor. But so many stories here are, it seems.

What a pile of crap. Your writing is awful. You change from past tense to present tense then backwards and forwards throughout the story.

It could be a good story if you were a better writer.

Excellent story. Remembering that this is erotic fiction I would grade this very high. I just wish I could read more of this story.

Hooked can’t wait for the next chapter. See what is done to break him to a submissive.