by Voboy
Convincing first person female narrative by a male author. PDH (pretty darn hot!)
"alone in modern America," that's a strong turn of a short phrase.
And then, what of the sperm? Are they both such idiots they don't realize a pregnancy could ruin both of their lives? Yet they both blithely fucked away, unprotected but not caring. And we leave them for a day at his house where several more loads will be pumped aboard.
You story telling is excellent and the story is very erotically satisfying. The seduction was a bit too pat, and moved a little to quickly for reality. But the sperm? What about that. The little white army marches on.
A great story.
Looking forward to more of your work.
Scott is beyond stupid.Great story and well written, though. Ibelieve you are my favorite author.
Witty, charming, and dangerously sexy! I love how you pushed and pulled at the boundaries and moral grayness in this story. Excellent writing!
I totally agree with the other commentors, a fabulous story, very well written, holds your attention. Yrs Vickie is a dangerous woman. 40 year old frustrated men can loose their minds over young hot pussy. Bless his heart.
Very well done. I enjoyed the story, not just the erotic part.
My only criticism is your decision never to use the word “pussy.” I’m pretty sure the women who've been in my life would, outside the gynecologist’s office, use it before they’d say “vagina” or “vag.” I do not agree with the use by many authors of the “c word.” In my experience it’s #1 on the list of words they would never use. Pussy is much less offensive and would have made the story more realistic, I think.