by IrisAnnHunter
Very impressive - emotional, good pace, nice syntax, no spelling errors!
Keep writing if you can. May be the best story here.
You have made a great job of representing anal as it should always be: a tender and loving moment of deep intimacy. Thank you for that.
I really enjoyed your story and hope to enjoy others in the future. :) In particular, I appreciate the depth of emotion with which we as readers were so quickly and thoroughly immersed.
This story, or should I say encounter, brought a lump to my throat and that tale-tell pickle of tears to the corners of my eyes. Just...wow. beautiful.
Sex, rough and yet tender, strong and yet gentle, healing and strengthening instead of demeaning and weakening. Your story is what women really want, in bed and in life (it's what *I* want, anyway). Thanks for a great story!