by Gina_B_33
Awesome! You present an excellently developed story with intriguing characters. Well written.
the only thing was it was just a little long for me, but I did read every page
This is one of the best stories i've read. I started reading it and i thought this can be a good short story, then i realised it was a bit longer, but you kept it interesting the whole way through and it was a relly nice ending. So please write more of this.
this was really really good, even laughed out loud numerous times. A delight.
What an incredibly erotic story!
And the ending was so poignant.
Well done!!!!!
Truly wonderful! Detailed and well written! The ending was lovely, though I felt it arrived to soon after the story went on. I love it! Thank you!
L
A woman's capacity for pleasure is much more than a man . This is a story where I would gladly switch genders . Well Done !
Lovely story!
Full of romance and sensual lesbian love mmmmmmm
Thank you for a loving wet wet moments of sensual pleasure mmmmm
Wet wet kisses
Aunt Helena
55yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
This was so good! Really sexy. Yummy...a lot of girl sex. I guess they forgot all about Cock Man. Lol. This definitely deserves five stars.
one of my new favorite stories. love the build up and change in the characters as the story went on. Can't WAIT for part two. dont take too long.
Really? Maybe it belongs in group sex or erotic encounters, but not in the lesbian sex category. Ewwww.
this story was great from the start, the build up and sex scenes very good. please continue
One or two more chapters please and end a better ending for Molly.
Ever hear of a 'catalyst' in a story, gr3ywind? Try reading the WHOLE story before spitting venom....sheesh!
thought the story ended a little abruptly but other than that, i loved it. the characters were well defined and added to the story. the emotion and feelings could be felt. great chemistry and interaction. now i want more. as in chapters to continue with these women. please! very well written. thank you!
I have to admit, at first I was somewhat annoyed at the beginning of the story with all the hetero talk and them getting excited by "cock man." But I held out and trusted gina_B_33 wouldn't put this story in the Lesbian Sex category if something good wasn't coming along, and boy was I right. To witness the transformation, of really all the women in the story was amazing. The ending was the "la touche finale!" Brava!!
One of Gina's best. Very sexy story. As a longtime nudist, I enjoyed the girls need to be naked as much as possible and their open sexual atitude. The Girl/Girl sex kept me aroused during the entire read. Cock Man was a clever way to introdouce Susan and Jan to their sexual needs. Being a male, I found introducing Cock Man sucking his own dick a good idea. Very hot! A bit of porn is always a treat, even though I doubt in real life a guy could shoot that much cum. While a long story, the girls continualy adding new activities to their sex kept me erect while reading. Made one want to see what the girls would do next. Very hot story. Pleasured myself several times while reading, Thanks Gina
Gina, your writing continues to be awesome. I really enjoyed this one and am looking forward to the sequel. Keep up the great work.
The story had some parts that made me wanna hurl but overall damn I didn't realize how long it was but I was so into it that I hardly noticed and I've never met anyone like Susan but I'm sure she would have been one hell of a ride
I was hoping they would get married, thank you for writing this wonderful story.
I love how the author let us into the girl's thoughts as the progressed from "straight" and demure to bisexual nudists. "Am I going gay?" "Am I really exposing myself in a public park?" - that kind of thing made it a great story for me. I'd also recommend the sequel "Officer Molly Roberts" as well as the author's other submissions.
Thanks for yet another amazing story. It is a well written, romantic love story. Although I am not bi or lesbian, the progress into bi sex is very belevable. As a long time nudist and also someone who loves sex outdoors, I congratuate you on differentiating between publc nudity and sex. As you made clear, sex at nude resorts and nude beaches is not proper.
Well written. Excellent development of the story. The ending surprised me momentarily then it quickly made total sense. Fun to read.
There are a lot of stretches in this story--I'm sure I would never be able to travel this
fast; but, this is not a criticism. What wonderful, loving characters! And the spontneity is beyond belief--and that's part of what makes this such a great story. The freedom is awesome! MORE, MORE!! Maybe even sequels!?
I first read it a year or so ago, but stumbled across it again this morning, and had to read it again. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Love it all it kept me wanting more. Great sexy story line. I hope you keep on with this story. I could read it all day.