All Comments on 'Lucky Strike, Sir'

In a couple of instances, you used the term "that" when the plural "Those" should have been the word of choice and you used the word "less" when the word should have been "Fewer". It was a great story and I am certainly glad that I had the opportunity to read the entire document.

You're an amazing writer!

Although this story was fairly long in one submission compared to others it was well worth the read, a very good story and captivating. The only thing I noticed was there were a couple of times Tabby was Tammy and as for grammar errors I don't care about them unless it deters the reading. Five stars