by majicman21
I hope you're not done- there should be a prequel-and then there should be a sequel, like a punishment chapter- not that she actually has done anything wrong but they believe she has and she gets some brutal punish fucks. But then they make it up to her. I mean that would be hot, right? But it's your story- haha.
This is about a wife and mother viciously abused by her husband and son, apparently written by a woman-hater.
There is nothing erotic about it,
Perhaps you should keep your sick thoughts to yourself
Whores can be faithful to the ones they love but will always want to be treated like whores. And to a true whore, that's a compliment. This story showed the reality of a submissively happy woman being taken by not one but two alphas.
There is nothing erotic about a husband and son treating a wife and mother as this sick saga depicts. This is pornography and pretty poor porn at that. Still, I guess there are sickos out there. Note that the author is one the "no answer" brigade as could be expected.
Lovely!
The Mother, a true submissive, loved, welcomed and wanted the way Father and Son (her Masters) treated her.
They got their needs met and so did she.
Wonderful!
~ Masterskitten26
This depicts the mother as unloved by her own family, that they only use her for sex. Yes, that is what some people like, but these are the people whom she's with for life, her husband who sworn to love her and take care of her; her son who she birthed, who gave him life. And yet, all they do is ignore her and acknowledge her when it comes down to sex. Her son even mistreated his own mother by yanking on her hair. No one should be treated like that. If you're gonna "serve" your son and husband, at least have them acknowledge that they love you, show affection towards you. This was a horrible story.
The actual writing seems to be above average for this site. The story did nothing for me. I didn't vote because I know I'm biased against this type story.
There's no passion, just the writings of a true saddist. Husband and son treats a woman like a submissive whore is super untrue. Porno theme with no erotica.
Bad story.
I enjoyed the story. Don't listen to the other reviewers. They just don't understand that some people want to be used that way. If they really didn't care about her, her life would be a lot worse.
It was well written and enjoyable.
I would like to go against the grain for comments on this site... DON'T listen to the people praising this story!
DO listen to the people telling you how bad it is... we know of what we speak.