by Slightlyslutty
A little too short but very arousing. I've been pegged once and it was amazing. Everything in this story repeats my experience except for where I dumped my load; she had to have it in her once I got to the point where I couldn't take any more without cumming. One of my best memories!
Some lousy sex, poorly described and not in the least bit arousing. Who were these people and why were they doing what they were doing? Not a story. Just an attempt at some butt fucking. 1 star.
Mind blowing! Beautifully described, almost feel as though I'm there.
No need for a scene setting soap opera
Excellent short story,you could easily build on this and add multiple parts...longer parts too.
This story is perfect for a couple. It has the descriptive parts that a woman would like as well as the down and dirty fuck-em hard part that we men like! Great story, hope to see more from this author, only Longer.
Your depiction of a loving couple pursuing what they clearly both want was beautiful. For those who do not know the joys of anal sex, many may miss the eroticism and intense pleasure that you describe so well. I identified with your story. I hope you continue to write.
Pegging is special and only a few really 'get it' or get into it. This story is about a gal who 'gets it' and then gets into it. I like it.
A perfect example of how to do a simple short sexy story. Usually I prefer a bit more build up, but this just describes the ideal fantasy sexual scenario, and that's fine by me
I really appreciate the specificity of this story. Pegging is an intense and intimate act, and you've captured it beautifully. Please write another!
Some may disagree but I for one would be up for an experience just like this!
Well done. Clean writing with a good touch of atmosphere and sensual color, solid prose and good construction. Damn sexy too, emotionally conveyed. A fine job on a strong piece. Thank you for the emotion.
YES! Great story with even better descriptions of what is happening and being felt. Motivation to improve my own writing as well as get my ass thoroughly fucked!