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All Comments on 'A Nymphomatic's Romance Ch. 01'

by AnitaKing

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SejanusSejanusalmost 8 years ago
Loved the story!

Looking forward to the next chapters. One thought about word choice--you might change the description of Molly's eyes from doe-eyed to something like innocent or wide guileless. Doe-eyed typically refers only to brown eyes. Best of luck to you.

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