All Comments on 'Heal Me Pt. 03'

by chiquinquira

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Too short

Don't stop! More...more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You're back!

Please, please, please keep this coming. I would love longer chapters, but if not please keep these short ones coming. We need more romance around here.

The dogs will be a wonderful way to keep bringing them together. Canine bonding and intuition are strong. They make good matchmakers.

Since both men (and pups) like the outdoors it would be nice to have them camp out overnight in the future.

sm1982sm1982almost 8 years ago
Way too short..

Obviously.. Story feels like it's going to take forever to complete at the rate you're going..I like both characters but the pace is much too slow for readers to picture where the story is headed. Hopefully Ch. 4 isn't just about them getting to David's car and him putting his things away before they step inside.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Do not stop and please give us more

I love this story when it started and I am glad to see it continue. I hope there is more to come sooner lol, I know life happens but you have me hooked again. Great writing, you have a fan in me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The end

Wasn't that satisfying?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What? Written 6 years ago and just abandoned in the middle of a promising love story. I really wish stories like this had upfront warnings so you know they aren’t complete. 3 short chapters and then… nothing. This tale has barely started, so the title “Healing Me” is ironic. Joey doesn’t even know if David is gay yet so there clearly has been no healing!! Frustrating.

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