All Comments on 'The Pecking Order'

Great read

Great read, hot 100% of the time. Great use of subtle physical descriptions to keep the action fresh in mind.

This really got me all hot and bothered in way that I can't achieve by writing my own stories.

An auother after my own heart, I share my companion with my two best friends sometimes much to female part of the duos delight

I am dripping with cum right now and I haven't even touched myself. I'm lying naked with my knees up and I can feel all my females juices running down my ass Crack cuz im so damn wet. My boyfriend is on his way and he's definitely gonna eat my pussy tonight. Damn that was a good story.

You have quickly become one of my favorite authors, another 5 star offering.

Well written, builds the tension slowly - fabulous!

Like all your stories I've read so far, that was just great.... time to resume normal breathing !

Outstanding Piece. Vivid descriptions and unpredictable story line.

:-)

Really. Much ado about nothing.

Too too slow. Unnaturally slow. Nothing like the three ways I’ve been in. Get on already stop all the nonsense.

Excellent, liked every word. What fun the future holds.

Good premise.

Sex is much too fast. Much too automatic. Needs more tension.

Four stars.