All Comments on 'Matured Wife's First Massage'

I didn't rate it because I couldn't actually read it without correcting so much in my mind. You really MUST get somebody to edit your stories. I assume your storyline is OK but if people can't get to the end, what use is there in writing in the first place? Don't stop but please take advice.

Good edging story. It kept me in wood throughout and to the end. The story really needs editing to fix the errors in grammar.

very good for edging, good storyline

I would like to see my wife getting massage like this and guck the person without any condom,But I want a Muslim to give my wife the massage and fuck my wife without condom and dump his full load in her Pusey.