All Comments on '"Pick A Card, Any Card..."'

Nice contrast to "Never that Bold". Thanks. Great wake up with coffee. Don't even bother with the newspaper!

I do so love your characters.

I am amazed at the author's ability to depict "Joe Sixpack" in such a realistic manner. Even though I'm not planning to view the characters in a sympathetic light, time after time I find myself feeling empathy with the subjects of the story. "Pick a Card" is a great example of this. Thanks to the author for sharing his talent with us!

Thank you for writing this story. I adore the bisexuality of Emily & Tracy and their bonding with Ted/Calvin.

(Sarcasm on) Picking up girls with sleight of hand....unbelievable. That never works! (Sarcasm off) Good story, though. Thanks.

Liked the story alot. The guy was very smooth, liked how he took care of his mom, and the characters were believable.

I very much enjoy these stories you write for your own pleasure please continue.

You have the craft and you use dialgue well

You write purity good for a southern boy. Keep at it.

Decent story. Personally, I didn’t enjoy the part about golden showers or one of them saying she needed to drop a deuce. Also I would have preferred a little more detail. It seemed disjointed at times.

Dang, bro! You’ve got the language and the culture down pat! I kept waiting for someone to talk about studyin’ the War of Northern Aggression in their history class...

The sad part is something like this has probably happened!

Nice little feel good story. Dumb kids have kids every day but baby daddy stepping up, claiming and caring for mommy(s) and child is not that common. Unconventional does not necessarily mean bad.

An interesting story, and one I'm now exploring on Lit.

Perfect. Characterizations with no clumsiness. Dialogue that charms. Thanks for sharing!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Your awesome, Thank you for your time and effort!!!!!!!!