All Comments on 'Shadow Walker'

A great start, here's hoping you're going to write more

Really, your story scratches my fantasy itch. It's a big itch, and doesn't usually involve sex. I would kind of like to know more about these "shadow walkers."

It's a common feature of fantasy to give your main character an epic super power in a world of super powers. I challenge you to make your story stick out.

Aside from a few typos and small grammatical issues, (if you use quotation marks, then continue the sentence after them, you should just put a comma inside the marks -- no other punctuation inside them), this was damn near perfect.

I await the next installments, 'cuz so far I'm definitely looking forward to this.

It is really difficult to find a good fantasy story with or without sex and yours is definitely good keep going and PLEASE dont leave the story it shows great promise

Awesome story! Please keep at it!

It's piqued my interest, I shall await the next installment.

dude u gotta keep the stories coming

Wow I wasn't expecting my first story to have this kind of reception, thank's for your kind words guys I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll make sure to keep your interests with the next chapter :)

Great job done mate! Just keep it up. And please don't take too long :)

You need an editor pretty badly to clean up he spelling and grammar errors. For those of us who are put off by that sort of stuff, this was a somewhat painful read despite the otherwise solid premise.

Really original twist on an overused storyline.

Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Not "Harry", but still original.

Great read patiently waiting more

More of this ASAP please.

As someone who's main'd a Shadow Priest for a LONG time (fucker got nerfed in 7.0.3 and now i'll go disc probably) I love the lore of the shadow priest. Use the darkness, who gives a F#*K, bring the agony and pain and darkness. But he seems like a nice guy normally so this should play out interestingly. I hope she realizes he's cool and not gonna freak out and level the building or anything.

I can see this becoming one of the best series ever and would just like to say that you are doing an awesome job and to keep it up.

...carry on...and yes, an editor would be quite useful ;-)

This story will definitely be one of the best on this site you have already connected me with Eric please keep it up don't let another charecter die please.

I like the story aspect. Please make really detailed story alongside the sexy times.

Please tell me that you plan to continue this is see so much potential depending on the path u take.

Waiting for next chapter...

Mage, Succubi, Shadow walkers. Ok - I'm in. What next?

Great

An excellent hook, looking forward to seeing what it turns into.

-R-

Were the beep is the rest of it

Damn it don't leave us hanging!

I know that this might be a dead story but if by chance its not I would still love to see this continue

A great story. Since it's been a few years since it was posted, I don't really expect a sequel, but I would still LOVE it to read one

This appears to be an introduction to an interesting world. And I`d love to read more of it.

Very promising start

8 years and no chapter 2. Guess we can consider this account dead.