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if this is a Limerick, the third and fourth line should rhyme.

try "I love you dear lass"

or "I think it's a gas"

for your third line

makes a rhyming spiel. TK U MLJ LV NV

Though this might be imperfect to some

I would feel like an ungrateful bum

To give you a hard time

For an imperfect rhyme

After all the times you’ve made me cum