All Comments on 'Mark & Lisa Pt. 01: Key-holder'

Please continue! I love the original premise here!

I look forward to finding out much more -- five stars -- well done!

I hope she gets imaginative as the story progresses along. It's got lots of potential for a great relationship.Looking forward to reading upcoming chapters.

Awesome beginning to what could well be an outstanding story! Please keep writing as I am eager to find out what happens next!

I can't wait to read more. Please continue.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Isn't Mark lucky to have someone like Lisa living next door? Someone who will take control of him nicely... Maybe on Wednesday she'll even have a girlfriend or two over.

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I can imagine her not being home, or not answering her door. She can meet with you the next day and is wearing next to nothing. In exchange for her continued silence you stay locked for......

I do like the idea of a couple of girlfriends being over wanting to see.!

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Really, awesome job. Can't wait to read more of it.

Wonderful story so far. So many authors rush things, but the pacing is near perfect. Very impressive

Thanks very much for the (mostly) kind words and encouragement. Pt 2 is developing in my head at the mo'.

Can't wait to read about where this goes from here.

Reading this, I felt like this could actually happen. Story doesn't have the "as if" and "yeah right" factors which is refreshing. Please keep writing and thank you.

Really liked the story, captured it nicely about losing control from handing keys over. I am in chastity most of the time, 103 days today, and you did well nailing the powerlessness. Can't wait to hear more about Mark.

Mark sure is trusting, but what a lucky break for him-maybe...

I can tell this is going to be a great series, I hope that like me, you steer away from the cuckolding stuff, but... I guess I'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for writing

You need to continue this soon please!!!

Absolutely love this slow steady erotic beginning...please continue

We need chapter 2! This is a great story line. Very believable.

The only person he's at the mercy of is himself. The cage is a toy that he can remove, without the key, at any time. This was SO bad, I'm STILL laughing. You should have posted this nonsense in Humor/satire. STILL LAUGHING!

Ignore the troll - great start, lets have some more!

I'm a bit disappointed that there is no chapter 2. Please keep on writing. Ignore the idiots criticizing you. This is off to a great start.

Please hang in there. Good start to what could be a really interesting story and relationship. More please!

I'd love to see where this leads, soooo much potential!!! 5 all day!

I sure wish you would continue writing about Mark and Lise and the situation Mark has put himself in. You are a very fine writer and have some inventive story plots. J.

Hi

Love the story.

I see you wrote it a while ago.

Do you intend continuing or written something similar?

Cheers

Great start but left me wanting more, so much buildup without a sequel!

Great start to a very hot story. You're a great writer. Please post another chapter

I loved this Story

as it was not along the lines of where I throught it would go

It was far Betterand I loved it more because of that

thanking you so very MUCH

I really Loved this Story, because it did not take the road I guessed it would

and it was better because it did not do that but took a new and in my opinion Better way

just a pity that there is not a Part 2

but I was so happy with it

so Thank you so much for posting it

Great beginning to a story series. I suppose the author has moved on. Too bad. J.