All Comments on 'Tease Her'

I hope this is just the start, this would make a good serious I hope you keep this story going

I really liked this story, the pace and characters were great. Hope there is more to come.

"why don't we lay down a towel and you can lay down"

"why don't we lay down a towel and you can lie down" would be correct

Not the best writing and, as has been mentioned, inexcusably lax editing. A potentially interesting story ruined by sloppiness and a non-ending ending.

It was really good! Keep writing.

The only thing I didn't like about this story was that it ended. I was hoping for a few more pages. Incredible experience erotic story. Loved it!!

Great read, wish it didn't end so soon!

My bff and i shave each other and it always leads to a lot of fun. What are best friends for if not to help each other out?

Yum! I wanted more though! Great start!