All Comments on 'Breasticles Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This story is amazing

Please keep the chapters coming! I love the slow burn of this story and it's really well done! Love all your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story so far, poor premise

"Hey, I discovered you might have cancer, but instead of telling you I gave you a dangerous experimental drug without your knowledge."

Who the hell would buy that as an explanation? It ruins my suspension of disbelief, you could have at least had Gale told that she had cancer and a new experimental drug could possibly save her, but instead you have her blindly accept whatever this doctor says.

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