All Comments on 'A Girl's First FFM Threesome'

Brilliantly written, thanks for posting

Liked the sexy stuff, of course, and liked Lauren's thoughts too.

I want to write like this someday. Yes the sex was great, but it was the presentation the writing, that got me excited. Well Done, but I'm sure you've heard that before.

You did a great job of describing the events from the physical standpoint, but also showed us what you were feeling so very nicely. Well done! J.

It's a rare treat to find a well-written and very hot story but this was certainly one of them - more please!

So hot. Very descriptive and the way you described the characters' emotions was sublime.

This story is great, both in character and in eroticism. I can't wait to read more of your work.

More erotic because it is so well written and well paced. And the detail suggests it is based in a real experience? Even more erotic

more please!!!

i certainly hope you'll write more soon.

Beautifully told, and simply dripping with authenticity found all so rarely on Literotica. So many lovely touches - well done!

Don't quit, you're quite good, keep going!!! Loved it!

Very well written with believable characters one can visualise and like. Very sensual descriptions of growing desire and wonderfully lyrical sex — too few writers even try to describe what sex and orgasms feel like. I hope you will write more.

we, a couple, doing an inexperieced girl, for her first time , is unbeleviable erotic. ,

When we did Sandra together, she absoletly, demanded to swallow him off , as a thank you present -- OMG Sandra, Sandra

Great story. I hope you write about the naughty things.

Please write more. Your writing is exquisite.

Tremendously well written. Very hot. I've a MMF story percolating, very much in the same vein. Thanks for the inspiration. I'll be checking out your other work.

Excellent story. Well Told. I'd like to read more about their future encounters.