All Comments on 'Sweets'

Very hot!

Especially liked the prolonged slow burn and the continuity provided by his lack of smiling turning into a smile at the end. Strong work!

Reminds me of my own episode years ago of a young lust. I should have taken a trip to NY at least once for one weekend.

Should have taken a taste of that frosting when I had the chance.

You need to continue this story! I love the dynamics of the couple.

Brilliant bit of writing, quite enjoyed it. Now where's part 2? :)

I really appreciate all the nice comments. I'm so glad you guys have enjoyed the slow burn and the dynamics of this pair -- I enjoyed them too. :) It's not always easy to taste that frosting, even when it's right in front of you.

I don't have any immediate plans to continue Mark and Kyra's story, but who knows -- maybe someday an idea will pop into my head that's worth developing.

Such a long time since a decent story with actual sex instead of pent up drama. Bravo!

She loves her sweets, I love that Kyra is cream filled.

Next time Mark will get her glazed donut.

Kyra should get her buns heated again as well.

Well-written, loved the characters.

Loved it!

Please! Please! Please!

Or is it really HOT at the bakery?

I want moarrrr pleaseee

WE WANT MOREEEE! :)

Cute and hot!

I've absolutely loved your previous submissions and this one did not disappoint. Love the tension, build-up, and teasing-very well-written and sexy as hell. Keep it coming!

Frickin HOT!!! You must write more about this couple! They were SWEET! Mark was the perfect man. Just dominant enough without being too much. LOVE HIM!!! Love Kyra. LOVED THIS STORY!!! ❤️❤️❤️

So very, very delectable. Worth the wait (although I hope she doesn't have to wait as long for the next time.)

Loved it, thank you!

Very well-written story with a greatly worked flavour of romance, BDSM and food in story all about a May-September realised romantic dream of a twenty-something woman. Good work, and a pleasure to read.

We need another!

this was so overwhelmingly good! i could almost taste the frosting from her- whoops getting ahead of myself there.

the build up, the fantasising, the cute detail of his smile. so very well written, will certainly be returning to this one.

health inspectors might not be so happy, but who cares when us readers are haha!

This wasn't about just sex...it was something else... something beautiful...

Every single time I read this I get overwhelmed about how good this is