All Comments on 'Wait, What?'

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slapnuts69slapnuts69over 7 years ago
Good...but

You really need some editing. Waste for waist, attach for attack (twice) just ruined the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I enjoyed it

I know you had mistakes BUT I still enjoyed story.

Let's see MORE

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