All Comments on 'Canadian Confessions'

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daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 7 years ago
Nice and to the Point

Oh so hot. 5 Stars.

HoveringsecretsHoveringsecretsover 7 years ago
So gorgeous!

It's beautiful. So hot, and so personal. You are incredibly talented and sexy. I'm so proud to call you my friend and to be featured in such a delicious story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pretentious as fuck!

Present tense doesn't work (especially when you forget and slip back to past tense).

"She kneels on the bead"

Now that I'd like to see!

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 7 years ago
Good hot short story!

Well done... five!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
HOT PASSION

The burner of passion gets turned up ever so slowly.

For the first few words.

Then its hot raw passion

A very good read

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