All Comments on 'Elise and My Roommates Ch. 04'

This has been a great story so far. I hope you continue with it, even though Elise has now moved out. There's lots of ways for the story to go, but whatever direction it goes, I hope it stays a hot as it's been.

I will write more Elise stories in the future. I've grown quite fond of her.

I'm surprised that Kevin didn't ask Elise about the little circles of ketchup around her nipples in the pic that was sent from Tasty Burger. I would love to know how and why they got there, and how they were 'cleaned off'.

are these stories a build up to a story of elise caught cheating with the roomates & kevin breaking up with her or are you gonna cuckold him or is it gonna stay with flashes only ? just asking because i liked reading them &i would be really dissapointed if she cheated & than kevin being more of a wimp than he already is forgiving her

That's not the kind of story I'm going for. I'm trying to keep both Elise and Kevin as likable characters. While Kevin's put up with more than most guys would, passively watching his friends fuck his girl would obviously be too much. Kevin is overly trusting and will believe Elise's stories but I'm sure he'd break up with her if he had actual proof she was cheating.

Elise really does love Kevin and isn't looking to fuck his friends. She's just naive, very sexual and tends to get caught up in the moment. She often crosses the line but either rationalizes it afterwords or really sees things as no big deal, not worthy of mention. For example she thinks texting nudes to other guys is fine, and also doesn't care that Sara send Kevin pics. She even has her roommate send Kevin nudes. Why would she care? It's no big deal.

Will Elise get caught cheating? Probably not. I want a sexy story, not one with drama and consequences.

Has she already cheated? Depends on your definition of cheating. She honestly feels she hasn't.

I hope she would reveal some secrets of her fooling around with jeff. And again, can't wait for the next one! Keep it up. You're one of my favorite writers here!

I like the built up and the additional possibilities of Sara and Emily! I love the setting part of the story. Definitely hitting all my favorites. Please, keep them coming if you are up to it! Great work so far!

Can't wait for more!

When does the next chapter come out!

When will we get more?!?

Can't wait for next chapter!

I just finished through chapter 4. I really like how it's gone so far. I'm anticipating the next chapter.

I really enjoyed this series, please continue!

Would be interesting to do the same stories from her point of view

Great conclusion to the series. Elise's nativity to start was good but I didn't really feel you could say she was naive towards the end. To me she was a person who realized she loved being an exhibitionist and just pushed the envelope a little too far sometimes. A true free spirited exhibitionist. Gave all four chapters the 5 stars they deserved. You are a great amateur writer.

This is my favorite story - I wish someone would make a mini series with Emmy Rossum playing Elise.

I know you'll probably never reply to this comment but I'd just like to say it's an interesting story, it's cheating but it's not to the extent that it leaves you feeling shitty.

Still, I'm curious as to how far Elise went with other people, like Jeff. I know you've said it's up to the imagination but I'm curious about your opinion, I don't want to believe she did but I'm more inclined to say it happened based on how she said it.

I'm also curious on what her limits are, would she realise that having full on sex with another man would ruin her relationship?

All in all, a good series but I really wish Kevin would punch his roommates, they deserve it.

I like it better without sex with other guys, it keeps the naivety more believable, like a naive handjob, groping, innocent thinking with guilt of cock in mouth, small stuff that doesn't say "I'm a slut and I know it, tee hee". I like that it kinda stays in the middle, the guys get off on her, she sticks with boyfriend sex and doesn't want to cheat nor gives into blatant cheating.

Anyone wish this series was still going?

Kevin should have decked Shawn and Matt on several occasions lmao

The restaurant piece was super hot! Would have liked to have heard a bit more of Elise's thoughts while naked, but I realize that is a bit more difficult with the story being told from Kevin's point of view.

Love this series! Please write more chapters about Elise!

Idea for the next chapter: "You told me no one could fuck my pussy, Kevin. So I only let them fuck my ass".