All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 05'

Well you have done a beautiful job of chapter 5 Turbidus. You have written Randy and Matt with such charismatic chemistry, I love it. Thank you. Subdued.

This story is sweet and tender but also smoking hot at the same time. I'm always excited when I see an update for it. I like these two together whether you decide to turn it into a romance story or not. Their chemistry is good and your writing excellent

Bring on a few friends, speedo's and group massage sessions leading to some great sexual fun.

Wonderful story, hot chemistry, beautifully drawn characters. Matt, Randy, Liam and Mom are totally believable folks.

The humor you bring to this story is incredibly touching and the internal voice of Randy is a real delight. Look forward to reading much, much more! You are a very descriptive and gifted writer.

Thank You,

Ab

“Maybe you should try breathing out of your eyeballs"

“I'm not sure how one breathes out of one's eyeballs”

Another great chapter

Love your very hot descriptions of the two guys admiring each other's bodies. You are a talented writer!