by rpsuch
I wonder if it would work if you turned the sexes around and let the husband speak. It certainly Works this way!
You've brought a new style to this board. Fable
This was an interesting story. Mostly it was different. I'm one of those people who when he goes to the movies will almost accept anything that is truly original, because most movies are derivitive. This is a story on Literotica that I never saw before. I loved it.
It's great to see another loving husband & wife story on this site. What a wonderful gift the husband made for his wife. Although I am sure that a few of the female readers will be saying he should be doing this all the time, not just as a special gift.
I applaud your efforts to write stories about actual "loving wives" and their husbands. It is refreshing after wading through the foul muck some of the other authors consider to be loving spouse stories. Please keep up the good work.
No matter what anyone says, just keep on writing. It is your right!
Very good. I have almost never read a romantic story without the explicit sex scenes. Very very good.
after I read your story it inspired me...my wife had just left for puerto rico to visit some family....i thought this would be a nice touch when she got back, so since i run my own business, i had the time to do it....i am now waiting for her to return.....
I have one of those at my place..
Washes, cooks, cleans, mows, digs - refuses to iron though,
BUT he does his other 'duties' so well...
Kilcannon, please let me know how it goes when she returns.
a very loving, caring story. I think I'll go and give my wife of 43 years a big kiss.
one of the worst i have read......no, the worst
Cute and funny. What made it so fun was that it was so true. Enjoyed it a lot.
I can't believe I'm reading my dad's stories on literotica.
Story is too predictable.
-SLSuch
Proves that romance isn't just about intimacy and sex, but is also about all of the little considerate gestures. It's a really refreshing outlook.
It is eerie how this story parallels my life!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
SOLD! I don't care what he looks like, I want one just exactly like that!
cute story. Reality is every single weoman who scream at him for fucking up cleaning OR the cooking OR the food shopping or wearing out the kids....
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Hillary in 2008!
Perfect snapshot of the loving things that make a relationship work. Laughed so hard I nearly fell from my chair. Well done indeed. :)
Beautifully illustrates "What I Learned from Literorica." Sorry if that's not the exact title, but I don't dare checking and risking loss of this accessible comment box now that I have it -- the others at the ends of all other stories all tend to be covered by Literotica's end matter on this computer, rendered unusable.
Discovered your writing only last night, and I now plan to spend the next few days reading all of it. It's thus far intelligent, witty, and articulate, even in the mimickry. Above all, morally perceptive in subtle ways I'm appalled to say I missed! Instance: your conclusion to HardDay'sNight's blackmail story -- not just the detective-like detecting of the situation's implicit implications, but the moral passion with which your character expressed his indignation and then topped the plot! Add "cunning" to the list of traits above.
A marriage is a partnership with love, respect and trust as the foundations on which to build.
Loved the story and how true; I'm sure I'm not the only one who should be doing more of this type of thing for the love of my life!
PS don't tell her indoors about the second bit LMAO!!!
Well, one with kids in any case
Loved it.... very nice....read it to my wife.....mistake LOL!!!!
Now there's a man who REALLY knows what turns a woman on! The next thing you know, he'll be doing the windows! ;-)
Thanks for a lovely, romantic little flash story!
I re-read this story every few months.
It’s a sure-fire way to Get Really and Truly Laid.
‘Nuf said
He delivered on the foreplay, only foreplay of a different kind. They she would really appreciate. How cool is that? A 5 Star Rating.
Clever.
A great plug for my notional T-shirt:
(front, small type, vertical list):
Laundry
Dishes
Vacuuming
Child Care
Back Rubs
(back, two lines of large font, across shoulders and just below shoulders blades):
Some guys will do ANYTHING to get laid!