All Comments on 'Sarah was Made into a Model'

Should be titled "Sarah Writes Another Shitty, Suck-Ass Story" and is too dumb to see how awful it is!

I agree that the story could use better character development, but guys come on, you don't need to be brutal about it.

Why do you even waste your time writing this garbage?

As the others have already written enough hateful comments, I am going to save you the trouble and just say, read the other stories and get the crux of what gets the blood flowing. Like the others said there was no real character development. No description as if you were straight before what were you thinking when the guy took you to the Women's bathroom where you sucked him off without hesitation.

Actually it boils down to, don't only describe what you were doing or saying but what were you thinking and what were your reasons behind it.

I got up to the bit about pierced ears and college spelt as collage and I gave up.

The negative comments you're getting, Sarah, come from mean people. Most are probably just plain jealous of your active and successful sex life! I really enjoy playing with myself while reading you. Add a few more explicitly described moments, a touch of your girlfriends' dialog among themselves about you, and you'll have yet another winner!

Gian Varlo

I really liked your story .. it was a bit brief but I followed every word and enjoyed it .. ignore the negative comments they are just shallow .. more please

The person that wrote the comment "Meanies" obviously has low standards when it comes to stories, probably pees the bed also.

Some of us would love to be your characters...

Sarah was made into a model

So she says in her tale

But it's so badly written

It can't be even called stale!

Sarah she writes lots of stories

About a guy who puts on a dress

But all of her stilted scenarios

Are a worthly and silly hot mess!

Escape is impossible!