All Comments on 'Meeting Brooklyn'

Vividly described.

I was all into it until the "S" bombs started dropping. Slut this, Slut that. It wasn't necessary. It took away from the story to me. This was a first time meeting with a first time kiss that was "magical." Their first time together was a straight up slut calling fuck. Where did the magic go? Oh well, c'est la vie

I really like the conversation throughout, and I like the rapid lust. They don't all have to be pot-boilers of tension for 2000 words before we get to the first kiss, fantasy isn't like that (for me anyway).

More please.

A great story. I hope it's the first of many from a talented and imaginative author. EM 💋

Love the story. Glad you branched out to Literotica :)

I loved your story and thought it was well written. I'd like to put this story and any others you have in my book. Plzz contact me at Nathanstineford@gmail.com

More than she bargained for? Not really.