All Comments on 'How Girls Night Changed My Life Ch. 03'

Can't wait to see what happens at the party. Threesome? Foursome? All out orgy? The suspense is killing me!

Know the difference between to and too.

People don't wear close.... the word is clothing or clothes.

You are obviously intelligent, use a friend who can spell and have them proof read your stories.

Your spelling is ruining the flow of your stories.

Would love to read about the hubby, wife, and Kim getting it on. When is part 4 coming?

Wow, what an awesome story!

However, you really need an editor.

Come on, it's "definitely", not "defiantly".

Your story is great but your writing is terrible! Almost unreadable. Please get someone to proofread and make corrections and they will be so much more enjoyable for your readers.

Great story shame he can't spell or get words like definitely as opposed to defiantly correct, so many mistakes and it's too not to !

The word is "definitely"; NOT "defiantly"! Make the correction for KrissesSakes!

Otherwise, a hilarious self-deprecating, low-brow effort in fantasizing the reality of having a 3inch dick to a delusional 10" ladykiller having women of all ages surrendering themselves in blissful submission!

Couldn't be more infantile or pathetic.