All Comments on 'Titans Ch. 00'

Good writing, good ideas, Love the ending. A planet OUTSIDE of our dimension? I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Your story is well written and has a nice pace to it.

Love the ideas, can't wait to find out how they will develop.

R.W.

Loving it so far. Well written. I am eager to see where the story will go.

you had me reading avidly. Just hope you finish it. ..... :)

I also hope you don't turn him into a soul searching, waffling, over thinking the morals of HIS culture onto this entirely different one that he has arrived at.

Great start. Can't wait for the rest!

Don't worry wolf9696, there's minor amounts of fish-out-of-water stuff, but no philosophising; just a future soldier kicking ass in a world that he doesn't fully understand. I've read stories similar this before (loved 'Upon a savage shore') so I think I know what pitfalls to avoid to keep it fun and not too serious.

Glad you're all enjoying it!

A couple of non-sentences (no verb) made the first paragraph difficult to read, which almost put me off, but I am glad it didn't, as the writing and promise of the story rapidly improved!

And there are ten more chapters?

Goodie!

I'll hold my breath until you post the next one.

*Huge intake of breath*

Interesting setup and I'm really looking forward to the story as it unfolds.

Love the apmosphere you're setting. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Very good setup looking forward to more.

You found the sweet spot between giving enough info for us to understand the tech and and some basic background info without getting bogged down in details. The story, the setting and the characters all flow together very naturally; nothing feels forced or contrived.

Excellent first chapter

and I had to say this to you

This story is fucking awesome. its so cool, never mind well written and thought out!

JC

Read like a space/fantasy epic. Just the right amount of mystery.

Real good work!