by Pleasurewhore
WOW! I really like this story! I absolutely loved some of the lines you used. I also loved the analogy about the seconds before impact in a car accident- genius! Thanks again for a hot, well-written story. Looks like I need to do laundry! *wink* :D
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You never have a good word for anyone, or even a 'Thank you for trying'. This was a really good story, as is shown by the number of favourites it has. You are on the wrong side, nonnie -- as I said, why do you bother coming here at all?
Pleasurewhore -- it was a pleasure! Five stars from me -- and ignore nonnies!
The only problem I have is the aching need to be strapped up and taken from behind. It's your fault, but nothing bad about that!
Good story, Pleasurewhore. It is well-written, sexy, and edged with a sense of danger that gives it a kick. I hope you have more stories to share.
Not bad, I've read better. I really liked the story about that big fucking red dog, your writing isn't quite as educational, I didn't learn anything about K9's. This is honestly just a little too raunchy for me, maybe next time you could just talk about what kind of sounds Animals make or some shit? Food for thought.
Pleasure is definitely my favorite writer on Lit. Her visceral descriptions are fantastic and the way she really gets to the root of her theme's without unnecessary fluff is amazingly well done. I definitely gained some form of "Understanding" from this story.
Pleasure you truly understand the dynamic involved between a Dom and his sub.
Pleasure - pain one in the same
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