All Comments on 'One Late Night'

Miss_saissore, you have a talent, cant wait for more. Best wishes: Opal Gems

Very intriguing. I'd love to see more of these two, just hope that things won't turn into hardcore bdsm between the two of them.

I really liked this story, and it was well written as well, I hope there are more stories about these two ladies, but not involving the club

A great start but it could be better if the few errors had been corrected. Print off and read your first draft through (preferably out loud )before submitting. This way the little errors leap up at you. Anyway I am hoping you continue with your story.

Thank you for this, your first story, and may I say it was very good. I hope you will bring these characters back again -- you write about them so well. Fishing-rod's advice is spot-on, by the way; it's so easy to miss little details when you're reading from your screen.

Welcome, thanks again, and please have five stars from me.

What a great start for a first story. You have done well. Now give us more about these two OK?

Please continue it. Pretty please?