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All Comments on 'Dick or Teat'

by AsnyLark

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great first page

The first page was great, the second got a little weird but then it IS a Halloween story... I would have liked it to end on a less ambiguous note.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Awesome Job!

But you need an editor! Great story! Keep writing!

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