All Comments on 'Policing Vampires'

That's it? Kinda odd for it to end there is feel as there is something missing though.

I liked the story, i wanted to give it 5 * but i have to agree with mermaid 2189 about the ending... Something was missing. Personally, i think it should have been in the NonHuman Category to me there was no Erotic Horror to it.

... and I liked your take on Vampire subculture. 5 stars from me.

Fanny x

I was hoping for Pam to bite Manetti while fucking.

I adored it. You did very well! I do agree with the others. the end was a bit lacking. perhaps another couple of chapters?

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LOVED this story. Very well written, GREAT dialogue, believable romance. There simply must be more of this story, and soon.

I loved your story!!! Your wit, plot, everything. So natural and easy, didn't feel like a written up relationship. *mwah* *mwah* *mwah* many kisses your way.

Hilarious had me laughing a lot, excellent story.

Couldn't ask for anything better, a great story that's well written, awesome main characters, humor, suspense, drama and some great sex that's not overdone. Only thing wrong was the story is too short. Would love to see where it could have ended, Phil letting her feed on him every once in a while, or maybe asking to being turned, I just wasn't ready for it to end. Thanks

honestly had to stop reading because the writing jumps around and is very hard to follow. maybe some formatting is needed. No draw to the characters at all

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A delightful view into the world of vampires and sluts.