All Comments on 'Dindi Pt. 05'

Thank you for all the fantastic work you put into this. Please do keep writing, because second language be damned it's very well done. Best of luck with graduating college and all the rest of it. :)

U write better than most people on dis site who can't speak any language apart from English.....thanks for your beautiful writing......i can't wait to read more of ur work.....

I hate to ask after writing a beautiful novel, but Can you give us an epilogue? I wanna see them with babies...

This is one of the best pieces on this site. Such a fullfilling story and beautiful characters. Thank you. And the epilogue was just what was needed. Please write more stories.

Bloody brilliant

This was excellent and your writing progress shows!

This was wonderful you're a brilliant writer :)

I'm so glad I decided to read this tale! So grateful you took us on an adventure with these two. We definitely need an epilogue.

Top notch...

Loved it!

Next...

5*****

I realy realy liked your story... So much that I think the 50shades of grey series would have been better was it your story! If it were this story line!!! I love how you capture the intenseness of their connection! I love how you show that the characters are human, with feelings.... And I really could connect with morena as if I also have walls around me and I find it hard to let someone it, to let myself love... A story is succeeded when a reader kan connect with the characters, and even recognize themselves in them.... You should really keep writing, and consider to write a book... I would read your book

Love the ending!

Been reading stories here for years. The first time I have ever posted. Simply the most authentic interplay of 2 people building a relationship, and believable supporting characters [not 1 dimensional], that I have come across in the hundreds of stories I've read.

Captivating, mesmerising, enchanting.

Nothing else to say, really.

Morena and Travis made me smile and also made me feel things.... I wish someone really wanted me that much or loved me that hard... well could just be fiction. Hands down my favourite story.

I've been reading stories on this site for the past 5 years or so and I've never been so captivated by a love story and compelled to comment on a story on here. These characters are so dimensional and real, your characters seem like people I know and I relate so much to Morena. This would make such a great story on screen, I'm already thinking about who I'd cast for their roles. Great job & I hope you continue writing more and hopefully get the opportunity to publish something one day.

What a wonderful story. I tried to stretch it out as long as I could, but the characters kept calling me back. Thank you!

I really wish I could see these characters on the screen, in a made-for-TV movie or something. I loved the scene in the gallery and how vividly you described the photos. Great story, looking forward to reading your other ones!

Such a sweet and angsty story! Morena and Travis were both broken but helped each other become whole again. Loved this story. Please keep writing!!!

Great story!