All Comments on 'Father Figure'

Really great story, please continue with a series!!

One of the best stories I've read! I loved the developing relationship between Beth and Mike, and I was already wet reading about them at the pool, but when they began fucking and Beth called him, "Daddy," oh my god! Such a hot scene, but incredibly tender. I couldn't keep my fingers off my clit as I read. This amazing story made me come several times. And I loved the romantic ending. Thank you for writing Mike as a tender Daddy who cherishes his girl.

Very hot, thank you for taking the time to write a well detailed lust fest. I enjoyed it immensely. Your a fantastic writer .... Keep it up..

Thank you so much for a great story. Would love to see a follow-up.

Perfect.

This is one of the best sensual short stories I've ever read. Thank you. I like the clever authentic portrayal of Mike. I'm pleased with the ending too - their physical fulfillment ends with genuine love for each other.

A great read and worth every one of the five stars I have awarded it.

It would have been six stars had it not been for the distracting typos. Please do your due diligence and don't rely solely on your spell checker.

What an awesome, caring story. I loved every bit of it. I'm hoping that you decide to do a 2nd part to this as to how their relationship will affect the business aspect of them. I can picture them getting married, having a house full of kids and running the business together. Thanks for such a wonderful story. The only reason I only gave it 5 stars is because that's all it allows. Otherwise, I'd have given it 10 easily. ;-)

That was awesome!!!! Please write more.......

Well developed and a great ending. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Very hot and well written.

The competence of Diane (and later Beth) reminded me that many years ago, I saw a sign in a place of business:

Do you want the man who is in charge

or the woman who knows what's going on?

The tender, sweet attitudes made for a charming tale.

Adding in the faux warm father-daughter repartee enhanced the cuddly feeling.

Well told.

However, ending it after less than 24 hours of charming, sweet, hot sex, leaves out the really hard part.

What's the aftermath/follow-through?

How do they deal with the age difference? Is it doomed to be a temporary, although very hot, relationship? Do they date? How do the other employees respond? How does it impact their working relationship? What if they marry and have kids? He started his business at 27, and 20 years have elapsed. If they have kids quite soon, Mike will be about 67 when the OLDEST graduates high school.

What I'm saying is, the big problematic areas of this relationship are ignored.

But maybe it's better this way. Have the sweet, sexy, short slice of fantasy; enjoy it, and pass on with my warm feelings.

5 stars from me.

Paul in Oklahoma

Great premise, strong story! Can you add more chapters, develop a larger story?

WHEN SHE SAID “You Remind Me Of Him”

I think that he should have burst into tears at that point, and all that tension that is stored in everyone over time would have been washed away for him. One of those moments in life, and she too, seeing him as VERY like her Daddy at that moment, is overcome. She has got her Daddy back. And then the roll out. He is such an enormous man, I feel that she could have been bigger yet still seem small near him.