All Comments on 'The Lust Bus'

I liked this a lot despite the repeated mistake of clip in lieu of clit.

Thanks for the feedback. "Clip" is on purpose. Lamar's friend Dewayne says that he's an expert on sex, but doesn't know that it's a clit and not a clip. It was meant to be funny :)

Expertly written,great dialogue,original,and of course extremely erotic! ;)

Thanks for the compliment. If you'd like to read more about the mysterious Asian woman on the bus, and what was really going on with her, my other story on literotica "The Liar and the Witch" is the place to go.