All Comments on 'Killing off the Ho,Ho,Ho's'

by MSTarot

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome originality!

Great authors create great character development. Your hilariously neurotic, quick witted PI (and his spiteful Leia) had me sucked right in. I'd be all over reading about more misadventures of "James" if if you choose to expand that thread, you've left yourself plenty of opportunity to. If not, job well done nonetheless.

teedeedubteedeedubover 7 years ago
Outrageous

even for you. "after the presidential election". What a line. What a story. Fantastic, as always. My Christmas favorite.................

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pure Gold!

You need to publish this. Such a well written riveting piece of work! I hope you win the contest.

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherover 4 years ago
Nice story but too much weird

Mickey Spillane wording. Thank God for President Trump

MAGA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I know you wrote this some years ago, but it kept my interest. A good story with very developed characters. Thanks for your time and imagination.

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