All Comments on 'Wifely Duties Ch. 03'

Excellent!

She isn't dumb, just a naive 50's housewife.

She is also clinging to her illusion of privacy rather than succumb to embarrassment.

I'm enjoying these stories, please write more. Can't wait to see them develop beyond mere repetition.

Please update some more. I love the humor in this story and now that she showed her breasts, can't wait for the titfuck!

Just curious if you will have the wife realize that her husband hasn't performed his husbandly duties regarding cunnilingus. Perhaps when talking to a trusted girlfriend she learns more about sex than a typical fifties housewife normally would. Could lead to some interesting 69 experiences and her sexual awakening.

After all, the 60s are just around the corner.

This is great, enjoying thee progression.

Fair is fair, even in the conservative 1950s, and without wanting to give anything away, dear sweet Jane does eventually talk to one of her friends.

Of course, that's just the start of her friend's story, but I haven't posted the rest Jane's tale yet, so that's for another day.

And I want more! You don't want to disappoint a fan... Do you???

This is definitely the best one so far

I like how it seems she's starting to like it

The first one it seemed like she really didn't want to do it

Remembering this is the 50's where good girls did not do such a thing, makes this reading entertaining. I will suggest (I'm sure I don't have to) that it is time for him to give her some attention. I believe a powerful orgasm for her, (however you see fit) would start her craving a little more. Of what? Well your the writer and are doing a great job so far. I am curious as to how "worldly" he is and if this is experience, or curiosity on his part. Wonderful writing! I love how the chapters are short and he is going slow. Makes me want more and defines the action!

A light tongue in cheek erotic story that had me smiling and a little horny...four stars!

I am sorry that you have not added to the story, giving Jane more opportunities to demonstrate her dedication to her wifely duties. You are an excellent writer. Glad to see another story last year. Would love to see Jane demonstrate her capability for Mike's best buddy.

It has been a while, but not too late to add more scenes. Like in a dressing room at a ladies clothing store, when he got an erection while watching her try on underwear...so she could relieve his stress.

This is awesome! Please please more!

i believe that every girl must learn the sublime art of fellatio.