All Comments on 'Kiss Cam'

# 1

So many repressed homosexual fantasies. Denial is bad for you!

Couldn't finish it. 1*

That may be how it started and how it was for a large part of the story, but it veered off first when Penny admitted she was ignoring him and even further Amir entered into the mix. You're attempt to even things with Tiffany was minor at best.

Writing and plot could have been better. Definitely not as bad as others have said. Looks like other commenters went straight to the comments after reading the opening paragraph.

Def at least a **** Looks like guys these days get easily pissed with stories involving white wifes screwing black dudes.

@gordo12 - Would have been helpful if you said why - plot, writing or just because it is interracial?

Anon wrote:

"Good Story. Writing and plot could have been better."

That is sort of the opposite of a "Good" story or good writing.

This disclaimer should have said cuckholding, then I would have never wasted my time. I give a 1 as a score. I am looking for erotic not crazy.

fag cuck shit.

NExt time please warn to about bad writing. also note to keep insecure men away plz........... i dnot like cuck shti

don't tag wife especially if it is interracial. a lot of insecure men show up and spew hate on you. kinda feel sad for their lives. although i agree that that writing and story are not all that greatt, but it not as bad as some of the comments make it out to be. i enjoyed parts of it. i gave it a 3 but would have done 3.5 if there was an option

Too much description of sex scenes. You need a special talent to do that and I am afraid you don't have it. I would have liked to seen a stronger plot. I also remember reading something similar elsewhere.

Guys, relax!! This is just a work of ***fiction*** from an amateur writer with limited writing skills. It was not my intention to offend you or waste your time. None of my other stories have had so much hate, or so many views so quickly, or so many ratings (as far as I can see from the stats). Also, calling me all those names only shows off your insecurity... :-)

Thanks to those of you who have sent some constructive (and critical!) feedback.

Run-of-the-mill interracial fantasy story. The story was pretty much over after the husband saw his wife kiss on the big screen as the rest was predictable

I liked it.

That's what I do. I always get a few anti-cheating trolls who vote down and flame anonymously. Then there are the guys that hate anything interracial, then the guys that want 100% originality in every, single story on Lit. Then the grammar Nazis. I delete all comments that are critical of the content. After all, it's my story and I will tell it how I feel I want to tell it. Don't tell me what is hot and what is not hot. We all have our preferences, right? Take care.

Another stupid cuckold husband after his wife has experienced bigger cocks than his, he is not ever again get a look in. Best thing he can do is divorce the whore.

You're overestimating them by a wide margin.

How about cuck-boy or bull feed. You are the food, fool.

P.S. We all know who really has the hots for big black cock. C'mon out sweety, its all OK.

Here comes the "manly" brigade hiding their one inch cocks behind a veil of anonymity. I hope your mommas are paying you money to keep that big ass self-esteem-saving trucks running.

Author: ignore the idiots. Keep writing what you want. There are enough secure people who enjoy and like this shit.

Could have been so much better if he had divorced and married Tyronne's wife. Need another chapter where they fall in love and Tiffany get's pregnant. Then all hell breaks loose and Penny ends up alone and Tyrone dead.

Only a dick sucking, panty wearing faggot writes shit like this. Once again, I did not read the bulk of the story just glanced to the end where this bitch gets off watching the woman he claims to love have unprotected sex with someone other than himself.

This cocksucker should be bitchslapped by someone until he can find his own sense of manhood or until he's fucking unconscious.

Why are they still married? I don't think you can love and respect your spouse by doing what Penny does.

This was pretty good. A bit over the top having both couples be so open.

He should have become a sissy femmy faggot along with his son with Tyrone and his friends owning them and penny