by QSQuinn
Dopy. Ridiculous. And...
FUN!!!
I laughed so hard, I nearly fell out of my chair. Great work!
I reckon I’s gonna go straight to hell for enjoying this ditty as much as I did. Thankee for ‘riting it all down an makin’ our faces smile & our britches tight.
This one deserves a sequel!
Or maybe even a prequel, how Mackay was banging her mother the same way?
...hilarious, good ending. Stands on it's own. No need for a sequel, or prequel.
The story is well written and the path it took was a great reversal of a very shy girl who became a woman so quick. Now she is the hunter looking for a stud to play with and there he is. I hope you write more at some point. Thank you.