All Comments on 'Pleading Her Case'

I liked the build up and the sex was pretty good. I look forward to seeing another chapter soon.

motion seconded, another chapter please

I am thrilled to see this one here. All too often people mistreat themselves in order to "do the right thing" towards a memory of one passed.... or because of a situation where the people are alive, but the relationship is dead. Clair never meant Drew to be alone. When you love someone you want them to be truly happy.....even with someone else, if you can't be there for them yourself.

I now agree, I'd like to see these two become a family....and see what their life together will look like.

This was a great story, would love to read more chapters in their story.

I will give it a 5

Bravo. Beautiful storytelling enhanced by deft writing skill.

this is one of the best stories I have read in a while keep it up

Wonderfully warm and winning story. Loved the set-up and loved the follow through even more. Very sensual build-up and the climax was worth the wait. Nice imagery on the ghost of the dead spouse. I'd love to see a sequel.

xoxo,

Di

Thank you for another very enjoyable tale Griffin57

All the best to you :)

I love this story. You are a very talented writer.

When your story started Drew wanted one of her cigarettes yet threw the pack out the window. Then offered her a nicotine replacement and that was the only time. But that stuff just doesn’t work that fast. It was part of your story and should have continued

Good concept, but it was way too rushed. Also, it really needed editing. And how did her Ford turn into a Jeep?

Heartfelt tale, brimming with passion, fond memories, love & some lust.. I almost shed a tear myself.

Thank you Griffin57 for a wonderful story.

I like that there was no judgement with most of the characters... it was very open and honest.

I love a bit of romance...Lovely story x