All Comments on 'Carnal Cravings'

This was pretty terrible. Dirty talk isn't that entertaining if it's just the same thing over and over. "Mother fucker this...mother fucker that", geez. Not really creative by any means.

The "anonymous" comment is completely wrong. The category is "anal." What is he/she expecting? A fucking episode of Downton Abbey (which is actually very good)?

I laughed my ass reading this story. I thought it was very well done. You have to accept it for what it is and not for what you would hoped it would be. Keep writing. Check out the stories I just posted. May be your cup of tea.

The story could have used more talk back from him. It seemed one sided. Sex was fine but her screams were a little over the top

I am blown away with your story. Well written and over flowing with my favorite nasty talk. Too few give that and it is so hot. I can only beg that you continue with ultra nasty talk and action. You are the closest I’ve come to reading mind blowing filth. Please continue and push it even further. Hold back nothing.