All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 40'

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irishcream44irishcream44over 7 years ago
Sorry

Too long to keep my interest. Good luck, though

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Best one in quite a while

This was a very good chapter. I think it tied the Sean and Pam thing up pretty well. I wasn't very fond of this story line at first because Elsa could have completely wrecked their marriage. In real life that would surely have been the case. This is a Steve Wallace fantasy where the endings are mostly happy, (I like happy endings), so it was expected.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

why do we need more work people involved in an already convoluted story?

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...