All Comments on 'Belinda Ch. 02'

by Humpdee84

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Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
Great story...

And aside from a few grammar errors, great job!!! Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

too much story, too little sex

Humpdee84Humpdee84over 7 years agoAuthor
Too Little Sex

There was virtually NO sex in this story. It was a follow up to the FIRST chapter. If there are subsequent chapters, there will be sex, but sex does not have to be a part of every chapter.

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