All Comments on 'You Who Know...'

I wish I had a linda and marjory when i was in my 20s

I had to learn much later

Luckily i had a lovely teacher

Thank you so much for the story

The name Chloe appears in the last few paragraphs. That should be Sara. I missed it on the final edit. I'll change Chloe to Sara after the contest.

Dude's enough romance!

Bring horror!

I'm not quite sure how it came to be that Linda loved Harry. I thought they were blah to each other??

Where's the story? i feel like i got the introduction, an appetizer, but was never served the main course???

Thank you for your comment on my comment.

In fact, I thank you for all your stories which I always enjoy.

I still like Chloe :)

Confused me... Loved the story... BUT when I reached the name change I thought perhaps I had a mini brain fart... Had to go back and carefully re-read the whole thing to see if I missed something....

You did your usual wonderful job and I loved it. Cute tale, please keep writing!!

a combination coming of age and awakening. I wish it had been several pages longer.

I have edited this story now the contest is over. The names are now consistent throughout. (but the tags aren't!)

Cannot wait for chapter 2 & 3