All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 16'

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GforGrahamGforGrahamover 7 years agoAuthor
note from GfG

I have plenty more in store for our hard up hero, but would like feedback on whether to continue. I am also considering going back to the start and re-writing the early parts. I would appreciate any constructive comments.

I will be working on a new story in a different category in the meantime. This other story has been echoing around in my head for some time and needs to come out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

please continue please !!!!! been waiting for ages for this . thanks so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please continue this story

It is one of my favorite stories on Literotica and I await each new chapter to see the next developments.

666iceman666icemanover 7 years ago
Do please continue

DfG As others have stated far better than I can, please keep going with this series. It is one of the best on here and I only wish I did not have to wait as long for the next post as I have for this one, yet you are the one who is writing and I could not complete one post in the time you have taken for the entire series so far, so who am I to ask so much from you. A full 5+ for you. Keep the good work coming. Thank you

Hungry_ReaderHungry_Readerover 7 years ago
Just keep swimming...err....writing

Keep up the hard work on your story here. I'd like to think that most of your readers would prefer you finish your story before you go back and start redoing parts of it. I know I'd prefer that at least.

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...