All Comments on 'The Dress that Stopped the Pain'

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the_MiCrOthe_MiCrOover 7 years ago
Just too

fucking good.

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice work

Great little store, like it a lot

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 7 years ago
Winner

I loved this story a lot. I thought it more romantic than erotic. My choice for best Valentine story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good stuff.

The dialogue was painful, but otherwise enjoyed the story.

WbradWbradover 7 years ago
End of Story does not make sense

You put " I just lay there thinking about all of the events of the previous night.", then went off tangent into the plan that Tessa had made. If he was just thinking about how did you get to the Tessa bit. That needed to put in the story of how they started talking about her plan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome!

I've read a few similar so I had pretty much figured it out but it was a really great story. Definitely one I'll re-read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
First Time

I just read this for the first time. I loved It! You go girl!!!!

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmalmost 7 years ago
Now that is what I call cheating the right way.

The wife played a hooker, but truly only wanted her husband. Great story and it worked out great for the couple. Thank you for not cuckolding. Lately seems to be all we get here.

Helen1899Helen1899almost 4 years ago
Loved it

What a great story, loved every word, I loved the ending it made me feel so good

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