All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 03 Ch. 03'

As usual fantastic!

The journey continues...

I've said it before; we appreciate you continuing to share with us your writing talent here on Lit for free!

Thanks HDK.

Hope all is well.

C

Good to see you back. I love this story, whilst somewhat of a fantasy there are bits that maybe close to the truth in these strange times. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for another great chapter.

Well worth waiting for.

Very easily worth 5 stars.

HDK, you really are very good at this and the story is soooo much fun to read. I really like the world you create with this group, would it be this way in real life. However, the sniping in Washington never does end does it? This story is an amazing blend of how it is and how we wished it would be.

Thank you so much.

This is a lot of work and I really appreciate you sharing it with us. Wonderful story!

Just love each of these scenarios you create for the constantly changing story that remains a favorite! I have said it before, but "Thanks" for this wholly entertaining tale!

I know you like the Beatles. How about some Beach Boys - "Wouldn't it be Nice?"

please give us your stories more often, so long in between when it didnt before. love the tie in to our real world and president except your world has nicer people in the press and congress. as the man says SAD

This is a nice and logical installment in the LIR series. Well done.

And was kind of disappointed. I thought this chapter was pretty boring and repetative. Go to a country, meet the officials, talk to the press and answer questions. Than repeat, repeat, repeat. No action. No excitment

Thank you for adding a little more insight on steves football career it was greatly appreciated. Looking forward too reading more chapters.

No cliff to dangle from until the next installment? Nobody shot, stabbed or lost in a jungle? Just funning with you, love the saga and encourage your efforts.

Thanks so much,

TerrytheTraveler

I do love this wonderful tale

You continue to be the best. Looking forward to the next chapter!

What a contrast between President Hammer and President Trump.

I loved this story from the beginning, and now with our current political leadership more then ever! You just wish we would be led by someone like Gwen. I'm sure as s*** would follow her lead through hell and back if necessary! Thx for the inspiration

This was kinda okay chapter

I have read better work from you than this

I hope the next chapter will be fantastic

This was a nice chapter...But can't compare to the previous ones......Hope you submit the next one soon.

I’m not a reader and yet I eagerly anticipate each new chapter. I was lucky enough to stumble onto this series with Lady in Red Pt. 02 Ch. 21. After a short read I thought it warranted starting at the beginning. By the time I caught up you had finished Part 2. Thank you for the effort it takes to provide well written, “feel good” entertainment. Like most, I hope you’ll continue to grace us with new chapters. Thanks again.

More please!!

As an English reader the gaffs concerning the English Royalty jump out.

In earlier chapters the references to the Duchess of Cambridge as Duchess Kate, then in this chapter to Gwen as the Queen when Australia already has a Queen, Queen Elizabeth II,

Other than that a very good story, just needs more research on certain aspects.

Any update on ch4 ???????

Have really enjoyed this epic. Ready to read more. Thanks

Can't wait for chapter 4!!

allthough i'm writing this at the end of LIR3 ch 3 it really has more to do with the entire series. my withdraws are so severe that i reread the series to get my fix. i'm always checking to see if chapter 4 is available, but i must say im losing hope. Ill wait since i have no alternative and give it my customary 5 thank you for all you do to make this old mans day.

Love this story and series. Please continue! It's a joy to read. Thanks.

Not surprising HDK has gone quiet since Nov. This story has been about an ideal, one that all of us that have read/re-read this to this point have enjoyed and found inspiring. Good things being done by good people.

Our reality is that the newly elected POTUS doesn't share those values, and is everything that the Lady in Red is not (would love to be proven wrong).

HDK must be sickened (as is most of the world). Commiserations to us all.

HDK, your foresight is uncanny. You have to get Gwen, Steve, and Kate back to Washington. The trash is piling up and really needs to be carried out and dumped. At least I look forward to it happening in your story. Too bad, not much hope in actuality.

Every time I read about the people of each country she visited paying homage to Gwen by going down on one knee and muttering "my queen!" I feel my hackles rise and don't feel like going on reading. That is, I think, too over the top for even the real Queen of England to receive! Ever since HDN came out with this scenario with Gwen's admirers I lost a little more respect for his writing skills.

Getting intontotal fantasy now. I'm afraid that being married to an American would more likely be a negative with Australian voting public. No way would they kneel to someone unless she was about to knight them.

I feel Japanese would be the same. They consider themselves far superior race to all others, just a great social confidence.

Cheers to the South Koreans. No need to stage the protests, they too are a very proud country.

I think the prisons will be overflowing in North Korea after that concert.

On a lighter note what is PPDA?

Apart from the total fantasy, I am loving it. I can fully escape into lala land for a while.

A large portion of ch 03 is the same as ch 02. How did that happen?

"Because of the short...." is the start of 03 and also in the middle of ch 02.

The Bee Gees aren't Australian theyre British.

Hey Nonny Moose thems fighting words mate.

The BeeGees are very much Australian and don’t you fken forget it

Hey gobby fighting yard ,the Bee Gees are British,they ended up in Australia to avoid juvenile prisons,much like the founders of Australia who were sent to Botany Bay over a hundred years ago.

A couple of thoughts. A president is entitled to bring who she/he wants on Air Force One. Others that travel with her should fly on other Air Force jets, including other 747s. They have defensive capabilities that The Red Lady would not have, as well as the capability for in-flight refueling.

Your comment that "The flight to Rome was going to take almost two days", with a stop over in Dubai wouldn't make sense for Air Force One since it would be refueled in the air and could/should fly non-stop to Rome.