All Comments on 'New and Improved Olivia'

It's an interesting relationship between the two main characters. I hope you add another chapter to their story. Thanks.

You keep so much in changes from her past....will you continue the story? Wieliczka

i saw nothing but a mentally ill lesbo slut trying corrup another person. there is no love here just trash. 1star just to votethis sorry story down HEY ASSHOLE next fuckingtime call it what it is a lesbo story so good people can pass

So I debated on whether to respond in here. People can like or dislike my stories and life goes on just fine.. Everyone has preferences, no big deal. But I do feel the need to point out two things.

1) This story has no lesbian sex in it. In the future? Maybe. But not this chapter.

2) Apparently the person upset read a 7,600 story without reading the 138 word introduction where I literally said "You could argue at least three other things here, so I will say that there are elements of exhibtionism/ voyeurism in here, some bicurious/ lesbian tensions, and some straight out heterosexual erotic couplings. But the direction of this is romance and love . . . So, that’s what it is."

The big lesson here? I always put in my introductions what to expect. I encourage you to read those. I am not a fan of the Literotica categorizations because a story generally isn't about only one thing, but I understand people want certain types of things. Thus please read the short introductions to be sure you know what you are getting. And my apologies if I ever produce something that is not clear.

Not sure where this story is going, but enjoyed the start. Look forward to continuing episodes.

So far the story is incomplete. You mentioned other chapters in your introduction, but this was first published back in Feb. I'd like to see where this story goes.

I hope there is more of this story to come, I really enjoyed it.

Hope theres more to this story

I’m just discovering this author and have enjoyed everything he has written. This story is great, and I do hope for a continuation.

Thank you for these stories.