by EllenBerryhill
Please continue with this story. My mind is working overtime trying to imagine your reaction to loving another girl with a big dick as a chaser.
What a fabulous tease. I'm looking forward to the reading the rest of this story.
Great story. Very well written. Looking forward to hearing the rest.
Don't feel you have to hurry the next instalment, just to satisfy the responses. Take however much time it takes to maintain the standard of this fine, first effort!
xx
Well, not only are you a good writer, you can write a hot story, leaves a body begging for more. I love it that Cathy came into the story which puts a whole lot of spice in it. I hope the next chapter is coming out soon!
Great story. I love the local details and how you wove them in with four lusty teens.
Great writing skills!
Superb storytelling skill!
A double hot plot - first time with lesbian, first time cock in pussy.
All this from an author in her early 20's?
And her first story?
JUST UNBELIEVABLE!
Wish there was a way to notify Literotica readers: there's this hot debut story, her only one, go there!
(drool, drool)
Paul in Oklahoma
I agree with all the above. Loved your storytelling and your hot sexual awakening. Thank you for sharing. Chris in Scotland
In a genre where it seems that every plot has been worn out with overuse
a new author comes up with a truly novel twist
Sadly I am forced to believe her when she wrote at the beginning that this piece was a composite of real experiences - so we aren’t going to get any more of her adventures What is left for her to do that wouldn’t be dangerous and criminal, too?