by Dar_Jisbo
You can give sizes for imagination. That would make it better
Good plot anyway
Enjoyable read. Keep at it, Luv!
xoxo,
Di
Who knew the Witham's truck stop in Medford could be such a hot place?
The Witham's truck stop in Medford (or any other tuck stop) can a very hot place if you meet the right transgender female trucker and are nice to her :)
It's a great story, and it's such a shame that it is not longer. You could add so much more to it.
You write some really excellent stories and I appreciate the realism. You also have some serious amount of content I have to work through but I am sure it will be worth it since you put in all the real effort and I just get to enjoy them. Thanks.
The only problem I see is that your narrator lacks a commercial driver's license (Class A with air-brake endorsement). Keisha would not put her job in jeopardy by handing her rig to an unlicensed driver.
Read again. Keisha isn't letting Dan drive the rig, he merely helps her load and unload.