All Comments on 'Anything for You'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Give some details man

You can give sizes for imagination. That would make it better

Good plot anyway

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Promising beginning - I hope there is a Part 2

Enjoyable read. Keep at it, Luv!

xoxo,

Di

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Truck Stop

Who knew the Witham's truck stop in Medford could be such a hot place?

Dar_JisboDar_Jisboabout 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Truck Stop

The Witham's truck stop in Medford (or any other tuck stop) can a very hot place if you meet the right transgender female trucker and are nice to her :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A new favorite

It's a great story, and it's such a shame that it is not longer. You could add so much more to it.

Spadger2Spadger2about 5 years ago
Surprise, surprise!

Well, that was totally unexpected!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'd love a job like that...

That story fits one of my greatest fantasies...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You write some really excellent stories and I appreciate the realism. You also have some serious amount of content I have to work through but I am sure it will be worth it since you put in all the real effort and I just get to enjoy them. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The only problem I see is that your narrator lacks a commercial driver's license (Class A with air-brake endorsement). Keisha would not put her job in jeopardy by handing her rig to an unlicensed driver.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Read again. Keisha isn't letting Dan drive the rig, he merely helps her load and unload.

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